Sept 14

great picture of the changed milledgeville! i really like it!!! Decent story too..not amazing.

I really really liked brook's story on Sept 11th!! great read. I love the feature lead..but is that ok to be done? Didn't we talk about having less feature-isc leads for news stories? oh well who cares i really liked it! picture was ..well boring.

the voice was good again, just not compared to last weeks standard. Thats not something to really get people riled up over, the "This is a future we cannot accept" on the otherhand is. great points adn well written. sometimes..i just dont like milledgeville natives because of the way they treat students and i know there are plenty of others like me who would agree and possible respond to that..

umm why didnt' the grove ad change? really?

features had a great layout!! i really enjoyed the "livin for the moment in milledgeville" layout, the story...was ehh alright, just informative but i think thats what it was supposed to be... Pictures, bios and chart are great though!

Good steps in how to become an RSO and this is prob the best way it can be written, but there have been a lot of bolded/bulletted steps/titles in the last 3 articles.

Ok i know the global warming story was a feature story, but honestly i got nothing out of it. I didn't like it from start to finish..sorry, but i didn't. It was just too..idk hypothetical and not believable

Individiuality held ransom-create title, interesting story, but why was he chosen. I mean yes, he is known around campus, but other than looking different what does he do?
The story was very redundant, i think i read at least three different times, that he was known as tony dreaklocks, or the guy known for his dreaklocks..
also some of it was awkwardly written.. "add the fact that he hardly ever wears shoes, carries a cane frequently, sports sunglasses at almost all times, and his signature drealocks, that he just cut recently, combined with such a free spirit, you end up with a unique individual who is just trying to get GCSU students to realize that it's ok to just be yourself."
wow thats long and could be made into several senteces..and frequently is oddly place, as well as the sentence kind of ends with "cut recently" and then starts back with combined with such..just didn't flow...
the intro of "the new coordinator brings big plans" is a little awkward, good but just doesn't flow well.
oh in the GCSU adding y-chromosomes..spelling error in a quote "women mature faster than men, and men do not always KNNOW what they want yet," Pittman said.

some good reads this week, buti can tell that the features are kinda stretching for stories..but i can't think of anything better either..so who am i to critic that..