Thursday, August 30, 2007

Colonnade Aug 31

Overall i think the paper was really good this week. Well put together, the stories were a good read and the design and pictures were good. I think the article on John Bruner was really good. Devin did a good job of being sensitive to the subject but still getting the news out there.
I really enjoyed the features this week. The picture of the theater is amazing..great photography, the story was very informative and entertaining as well. I really like the closing paragraph in it! Good job!
The graphic on the "students fight high temperatures was great! i like that its in a health box! Good idea! The interview/review of Corey Smith was really goood. It wasn't your normal review...liked it!
The picture on the "Players plot murder, comedy" is really fuzzy..idk if it was the printing or the actualy photo, but its not good quality.
Good quotes in the Flag Football article, but there is a date wrong there. It is a little confusing, it says they met on wednesday, august 31...have they already met? did they met last wed, or will they be meeting next wed? and the 31 is friday..not even a wednesday!

oh and the ad about the polls in the colonnade is amazing!! haha..well it will be even more amazing when i get the polls set up..ha

1 comment:

MMcGinley said...

Good eye. Please bring the date inconsistency to Corey's attention. A correction should be ran.